[Paradigm]

Originally Posted by Camp Bell

......i keep a cal strapped when i'm on the bluegrass haze...
.....aye, in case i gotta flash on a wildcat then blast you, k?
Cool, solid
if i'm scoping views, your life overdue.....i got past due range
my bullets is covert too, so jus relax.....the pass through late
connection isnt there swag off... past due range wat
action jackson with a tattooed face, cooking crack two ways
i'll give you this work with half the passion in a fast food pace
you are sacraficing content for multis
i've scrapped with galactus, you'll get dragged through space
i been evil, i'll leak dude til vin diesel splashed on saturns rings
doesnt rhyme content isnt there bro
i'm meeting hov when the round done, i need a match to flame
my doubts reasonable cuz this al bum, just faded to black w/jay
this concept played kind of a stretch
the black david blaine, training statements to eliminate this trick
i drowned a week ago but got ya act on display, entertaining kids
nah content. connection is weak

Originally Posted by Paradigm

Alvin Karpis:

You soft hater just watch player, I’ll have my goons masked up like Darth Vader
I’m a lot greater….& I get cake w/ out leavin the crib I’m like Lebron’s neighbors
lol nice
I’m a reefer blazer so If I ever meet my maker, I’ll be puffin trees bumpin Anita Baker
What I achieved is greater n I’m a fiend for danger…. I hold shit down & don’t need an anchor
weak concept. lol at ur multis
You run the streets w/ traitors not g’s and players I’m smart like Screech but a beast like Slater
Obscene behavior, I’ll travel back in time & smack the shit outta ya mother while she’s in labor
cool flow content lacking here tho
Dudes amped but my goons clap n hold the steel that’ll explode ya grill, I’m the true champ
They’ll roll n peel, you’ll fold n squeal….cuz you know the drill when they Boot Camp
okish... multis cool
Fuck food stamps, I know dealers on the block that’ll have the the heat drawn
When the police gone they got that white girl in each palm like King Kong
this is cool
You wack as hell Camp’ll yell when I body em they can’t track his smell
Come catch this L, I’m makin history and takin ya Liberty when I crack this Bell
ehhhhhh ok

Both lacked content and sacrificed it for multi syllable schemes. Content > metaphors > concepts > rhyme schemes and multis. Both kind of had the same flow and schemes. Alvin had better concepts albeit simple was enough to take it here.

Vote: Alvin Karpis