Originally Posted by big baby
I think Vegeta had more tribulations to go through, and showed them, so for all sakes, I'll say Vegeta, but I think Goku reached a higher pinnacle of physical strength, but not by much.
I never said that message was the fault, I said the word arrangements (I'm answering backwards) but he brought up a good point, the condescension is a unique and worrisome factor. I think sometimes you get carried away, so to say.
Hm, I guess it's possible that you do. But I doubt it. I can understand what you're saying. And I'm sure I could word it better (but this is about you, not me). Theres also a reason I am answering backwards, because my previous statement goes along with this. Your condescending attitude is even taking places in remarks of your own feedback. You place yourself above and that wanes towards: people understanding your piece, unable to weave intricate patterns due to the near infinite thought process of what you're writing, compared to the minuscule, tiny word selection that the english language has to offer, due to it being man-made, weak, finite. It's not that. It's just that sometimes your word choice is poor, and I think you havent yet, like vegeta, reached a capability of weaving what your head wants you too. It's like understanding how to achieve the speed of light, but we don't have any resources to do so, yet.
I think all writing can mean something, anything. You wind up a few couplet of metaphors and you go off that. Just because your mind connects something, doesn't mean it connects with readers, as well. Almost all the time I never understand what cryptic authors have to say, and that's fine, because they intended something through their own webbed network, and for them, that makes sense, and it may very well make sense if they explain it, but there is a subjective and objective line where 'how well' something connects doesn't become personal, rather interpersonal. You just need to work on things.
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