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Originally Posted by big baby
May I?
A lot of things to pinpoint. By rhyming, the assonance doesn't make it seem you have a grasp in words. I agree with p, its just a lot of words were input in the wrong spot it seemed. And it seemed lazy. If a more skilled writer were to do this it would be done better, even with the same syllabic count. It just lacks substance and the words in-between words don't support the scheme. Adjective and verbs maximize this and you tend to either cutthroat it or let it go. It seems lackluster. Idk. Not very good.
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hello bb da bb.
I have questions about your feedback and comments sir.
1. Thank you for your feedback and taking the time to write and read.
2. Do you think what I wrote means something? or is it just nonsense?
3. Is it possible that I actually have a mastery of words and am thus able to link the complex of concepts into a nonstop abstract rhyming pattern to help make them simpler...yet still mysterious as I said I would in the opening statement?
4. is it possible that you, like dan, do not like the message of what I am saying, so you find fault in it?
5. who was stronger, Vegeta or Goku?