[Scripter]

I like the approach and the speed. The beginning was tight with the timing. Keep writing!

"Don't push me,
in the corners of the closet and close it,
im clostraphobic,
so the clothes that cost you a fortune
got exposed to the force of my exploding emotions,
atrocious ferocious devotion,
left me with a broken heart, a golden dart
focused on a frozen part so cold and sharp,
it left me hopeless "eroding" like corrosive components,
i have a book but its not open to condolences,
hoping the commiseration gets some acknowledgment,"