This was alright.
And since a minor ive been seein these goals
The troubled soul
^This was the best part because you were honest. The rest was sort of contrived for me. Couldn't get into it but not bad, overall.
Para
Cool verse, I like the concepts you play around with. This was decent.
Caught ya mom blowing me on the stairs; bout to bang hoe
next step something rose in her mouth like I was teaching her to tango
^Hah
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