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Old 07-25-2014, 11:27 PM   #11
Vulgar
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Originally Posted by DexLabb View Post
black is the only writer on the internet that could beat me in a topical, thats why i respect him.
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Your style here was fairly tantalizing for its patient instruction. You come at the reader with a common man's identity crossed with a dreamer's thoughts - it almost reminds me of an academic version of Atmosphere. The contents are accessible, the diction is advanced, the outcome is inconclusive yet pleasurable to peruse. And that's perfectly fine. Perfection is perceptive and our reality is only as good as our positive outlook - seems to be what this was about.

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