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Old 07-25-2014, 09:40 PM   #10
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Originally Posted by Kin View Post
Not a fan of how you started this tho' wit' the rhymes of Yo,Po, Hoe pretty simple compared to what Mal was puttin' out...plus the whole "I caught ya mom blowin' me"...why is this corny 1st grade insult style so in wit' text nowadayz...Not diggin' that part at all...But I'm not hatin' on the verse cuz' You still brought heat in other sections juz should of kept it all to match Mal's content better since it was a Collab...feel me?


But overall good Mix up of styles...woulda like to see the content of verses more similar but still a good Read

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fist-yo/hippo bang-hoe/tango mechanized weapon suits/section five test recruits/investing groups ahhhhh... multi syllable rhyme schemes! LOL word. damnit. I suck.

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