blanco
this was cool, i can tell you're fresh to the swag and flow scene
like, i see your verse is rhyme heavy, content and punches arent
up to par tho. just keep doing more and it'll come to you. structure
your verse as a regular battle, but add a bit more complex rhyme
schemes with bragging type lyrics.
jilti
this was aite. i liked your flow and some punches
were pretty slick. the retro jordan line was crazy.
i think you doper than this, you just went light
for some reason.
good battle. i think blanco could be dope if you just
keep working bro, just wasnt ready today. jilti had
enough to get this easy, IMO.
vote: jilti
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