CD
thought this was fire man.godam you had some thought provoking lines throught your entire piece.
and to be honest with all that content you managed to keep the flow smooth..though i felt like your
piece lost me towards the middle..felt like it was an overkill of info but more or else the fact that info
didndt relly come to a great close...left alot open..but overall this was just amazing lol..
bent
now this was fire as well godam i hate you guys...lol seriously this was dope..felt like you had the story
the mechanics and a bit of cleverness to your piece..dope story telling man your diction help with that..
great word choice..felt like you accomplished what cd tried to do in a better fashion..alot of depth with
better closure...really dope shit man...
overall...i think bent gets this simply because his story seemd to stop at a better place..i was left completely
satisfied with his story...while CD had me guessing a bit...nnot taking away from CD tho his shit was godly lol
i just think bent did slightly better..another dope match.
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