Destoyer- neat setup with a cool closer. Fundamentally sound with good execution. good shit.
Windu- if you ever go so big that you need to overly explain yourself in a battle won on punches, you already lost. I think you should Draft several punches and split them up into different punchline variants and choose the one that hits the hardest instead of cramming everything into one little ass bar. Just a thought. Good effort tho.
MVGT destroyer.
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