zen
man your record doenst do you justice lol...nah but yo this was some fire man..i thought your slick rhyming was almost sneaky at times it was that good lol
felt like you took this topic and ran with it..great persepective on the tipic forreal man. also enjoyed the great imagery this conveyed..you really put me there
i mean you even go as far as to write like the time period your character is frm..i thought that added s much depth and orginality to yur verse...great stuff man
no complaints really...
cdm.
well godam this was dope as fuck..i thought zen dropped a ill verse jesus man....outstanding point of view of the topic..i mean dam i would of never thought of writing
from the roads persecptive..very original idea and your storytelling is onpoint through out the entire piece...felt a little dragged towards the end but you made up for it
with a strong ending..i also enjoyed the tone this had..didnt reallty have that traditional topical feel that frequents these leagues...i dont wanna say preachy..but it felt like
it was being narrated to me by this distiguished gentlement lol..great stuff man..
overall
i got cdm on this one...tbh i see no flaws in either piece...and both dropped some fire fucking verses...but in the end i gotta with CDM his concept was just dope as fuck
and im sure its been done before...i havent seen it..and this was some ill shit i just read..so really it came down to preference..and i got CDM with that..great battle tho
foreal foreal...
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