I liked mal's line better
the fact that his name is Amen is confusing because you want to read it like a nameplay like the only way 'Aman' can get in her mouth, but that's not the concept
it's the only way Amen can get in her mouth is when she's praying to mal. that's clever shit.
Amen's punch was worded poorly IMO and doesn't really rhyme either
v/malachi
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