Mic..
once again your droped a well written onpoint story...great plot my man as soon as i started reading your peice i kind of got what the end would be like..im not
saying that in a bad way..becaause i still had to read on to find out if i was right...which the journy was welcomed and whe i got to that end i was pleasently
satisfied. you have a very smooth melodic feel to your verse...its like the voice of your characters are very sof spoken..lol im ranting..anyway this was dope man
the story woven was just dope..the transitions and progression of this piece is what i took from the most...
Red.
seems like you focus this week lol.jk..this was outstanding man. the vocab use was very nice..though at tiumes felt a bit to much..wasnt enough to take away from your
verse..just me being a bitch. great flow i thought...i personally like these types of verse...heavy word use, lots of periods and commas..makes for a stop an glow flow that
i seem to gravitate to...as far as the story goes..wasnt as smooth as MICs..and at times got a away fro myou..but your def impressed.
overall
i got red glare...simply because stayed with MIC as far as the stories progession goes. i felt he brought a bit more to the table with his word use and mechanics..which only added
to the overall enjoyment of his verse..plus his take on the topic was a bit more fresh for me...good battle tho..
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