[UnbornBuddha]

You have a very funny name.
As for the verse, it 's well crafted. It's not my cup of tea, but it's definitely comes from a skilled mind. Though it will be nice if it wasn't a big paragraph. I read it, but I will be honest, and say my niche, my forte isn't battle rapping or horror core. So with that in mind I will say at times this lacked a conceptually interwoven factor, and seemed less inspired.
But either way the rhymes were good, and it had that edginess that is required in this types of pieces. Thank you for the material. Have a good one.