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Old 07-24-2014, 08:04 PM   #2
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This was very enjoyable. All of you had a good synchronicity. I liked most badweather's voice, but he still seemed a bit shy in terms of rhythm, as if there's something holding him back. His potential has not been unleashed yet, but will soon because his talented.
My favorite was your verse. And out of the others you seemed to make the instrumental become more one with yourself. The beat was okay it lacked an enticing element to it.
But I did dig the chorus it, and as for the third MC he was the most subpar in terms of verses. But he has a unique voice, and can have quite a unique presence if he keeps at it, which I'm sure he will.
But anyways good stuff. Hope you keep making tracks.
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