Yo this was crazy, I'm too high for a full breakdown but I want you to know that this was crazy.
Enjoyed it more than I've enjoyed a piece in a while, not to say I haven't read dope pieces but I really fucked with the style of this one, I like the schemes you used, what you said was dope and the honesty was appreciated as always, this was fire to me, keep doing you man.
Lines 5 & 6 don't fit tho, that's really the only thing that stood out to me as a negative against this piece.
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He listens to voices inside of his mind
Explicit and poisonous violent crime.
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