This battle was toooo short for my liking!!! Interesting how you both decided to go this route. Two completely different directions with the topic which made this an interesting one to choose a winner. Objective, your piece after reading it through, had me itching for more, more than Ink's piece tbh. Like Cake, I was hooked by your opening line & you did a nice job with your descriptions though, as with the length of your piece, the skull-panda thing had me scratching my head. Not because I didn't like it, but because I wanted to know more. What exactly is it your character is "painting"? Ink, you took a sort of "sex crazed" direction giving the attributes of a woman to a.... grapefruit. Points on the fact that it's pretty creative and different from a lot of the verses this week & you took that risk in going with it. Like Objective, you were very descriptive, and I like your choice of words to give some of your lines that extra extra. You both had similar structure and shined in similar aspects. While I feel that Ink's take on the topic was risky & was executed well, I felt Objective's piece, while it left me with some questions, was a bit more intriguing while also being written well.
MVGT: Objective.
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