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Old 07-23-2014, 02:11 PM   #10
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ok....letz get to it....

Playing catch with Grenades in the Trenches,
A Menace modified by a Shape that's Headless,
If your Faith is Endless, nothing can Break your Defenses,
I know the Score even before the Game Commences,
Creating Sentences that Penetrate your Senses,
-this was dope

Their army of menaces can be Seen From a Distance,
The only Tenderest Remedy is to Unleash the Resistance
Have your biggest Enemies Plead For Assistance,
Believe its real this isn't no Green Screen its Existence,
-Another section that was Raw for me

Steadiest Going up against the Mean and Deadliest,
Cold Etiquette, I Start my rise at Peak of Mount Everest,
-Neva seen these rhymed before Diggin' that shit


Believe it or not this is just me Hiding my Viciousness,
Keep it calm Instead of living the Life of Wickedness,
-Nice

Daaaayyuuuum this was Long as hell... haha
parts were real nice to me but I feel it didn't need to be this long...lot of it was Filler
real abstract...lotta the styles I see here have content focused on some Otha' Shit....this fits right in...def. a nice piece tho'...intelligent writer fa' sho'

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