The bitch forgot how to fuck. said you never pound it, mac
We had to start from scratch... n ended with claw marks down my back
Champ? You blow every tourney you're in. No way you'll survive here
Your ridiculous choking could distract us from the NYPD for 5 years
- Even tho this choke/nypd reference could have been executed a lot better, still feel as if it was effective, props.
vs
u have no game, guy; fucking ugly bitches is easy, don’t even need to play fly
I’d cover her face with a paper bag… u need to breathe into one cuz u too nervous to say hi
Whether its women or standing-up for urself, this scared guy vomits
your heart is so fragile… even ya chest has a handle with care sign on it
I motivate with skills, whore; fathered pink-slips if u wanna get killed more
I’ve never seen this pussy drop something that moving… u pushing a style that’s stillborn
- I liked the still born concept, think you could have presented/executed it a little more harsher, IMO. Seems you took the more simplistic route.
OVERALL: This was a good battle and enjoyed both reads. I got Nik w/ just 1 more quote but Sharp definitely did his thing here. IMO, what hurt Sharp was the Heat reference which I felt was wack and a complete miss for me and the closer that was stretched as hell. I think those 2 bars helped the decision. Nik has some weak bars too, like his opener & the Glasses reference, but were better then Sharp's misses, so w/ that being said...
v/Nik
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