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ribbit · 07-23-2014, 07:57 AM

Wasnt feeling this either i enjoyed the idea but ur lines didnt flip the concept as well as i thot it could would have enjoyed it more if u expanded on the idea more u needed to make it clear why ur rap sounds bettep in your head than on paper

07-23-2014, 07:57 AM	#4
ribbit The deputy of nc Join Date: Sep 2013 Location: The Rodent Kingdom Posts: 514 Battle Record: 1-10 Rep Power: 7784053	Wasnt feeling this either i enjoyed the idea but ur lines didnt flip the concept as well as i thot it could would have enjoyed it more if u expanded on the idea more u needed to make it clear why ur rap sounds bettep in your head than on paper