Quote:
Originally Posted by Paradigm
Greed:
Your whole wardrobe is in poor fashion. I dont know why these whores gas him
The only time orchestrate is when he conductin another mans orgasm
Bro I will invade ur bitch, i'll russian regardless of America's orders
You can Crimea river but most you'd do is workout on the border
Even ur style is weak and mushy, only thing I blow is trees of kush leaves
And I can tell u not only a high man....... you are a COMPLETE pussy
Orc:
Ur girlllll is hugeee. U can't hide it son
It's ironic all her clothes Trukfit.. & her body's the same size as one
My dudes will bury ya. Quit cruising all gassed
Cuz you'll see other people quick & we ain't talking moving on fast.
Im all text. O's tore necks from the Hall's best
&Greed gon' be talking bout that Nam battle for yeaaars like War vets
I won last round cuz when I drop dudes fear to post
Dog. You won using an Aero die namix line that was new five years ago
I'm who u try to be don't deny it Greed it's there for the eye to see
It's ironic saying you not a big O fan when ur necks a fucking shrine to me
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Greed's lotb was the Orchestrate np, but I have definitely seen it before. I liked the scheme and concept he set it up with, and he managed to flip it well. The other 2 lines I quoted, I did so bc I saw the concept and thought it had potential. Again, Crimea and Russian have most likely been done several times before, and for the high man/hymen wp to work I felt it should of been high men/hymen. But if he changed it to high men he would of had to restructure his bar to make it connect. Not a major tweak but enough to assist the wp.
Orc's verse had a great swagger to it. The delivery was a bit choppy in some areas but it's nothing to get pissed ab. His lotb was probably either the nam or Trukfit bar. Maybe polish the execution of each bar with a more fluid rhyme scheme in the future.
I've got this scored 5-3 Orc.
v-Orc