dunno who's who
verse 1-
It's always imminent,
Infinite coincidences and fisticuffs incidents.
-dope ....try sayin' that shit 3 timez fast
Intelligence. Or incredulous directionlessness.
Subjectiveness wrapped up in objectiveness.
-there goes another one..nice
the gold beneath your broken feet.
Yes, own the keep that holds defeats,
and hold the keys of the only peace.
Control your mind, devote your deeds,
To grow and find your own release.
In choking, breathe, approach, retreat,
till Nothing's Way is the road you've reached.
-Flow was flawless at the end....smooth
nice verse...Think when you connect your rhymes closer together those seem to be the parts that pop out to me...overall real tight wit' it
verse 2-
let go. Gouge at the scars, draw out the pain,
Van Gogh, astounded at stars, they sound the same.
-fire
that even we with freedom are set up graves no men evade.
Pawns tossed from a game of chess that's played by better brains.
They'll cut my neck of wood with a cement replace just to etch their names.
-Whoa....endin' was crazy
So i couldn't tell who was who...both held it down...pretty even skill wise and content...
nice drop!!!
HoLLa
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