This was great, word choice was properly selected to really get the point across and make the imagery vivid, I could picture this in my head as I read it. Schemes were all dope the whole way through as well as the flow which rolled off of my.tounge as I read it aloud. Definitely a dope piece, the way you put your thoughts and emotions down on this piece really made it great. I was feeling the topic. Great work.
Keep writing and stay blessed.
Peace.
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