I didn't like the chorus, but besides that it was good.
When it comes to actually rapping I think it's kind of ridiculous for people to critique you and tell you how to "blow up" when they've never blown up and likely never will. It's even more ridiculous when a person who raps like Drake says don't rap like Classified because there's already a Classified. In a site full of know it alls I'll tell you just do what you know because what you have here isn't bad at all. It isn't great either but it could be. Just keep doing what you're doing.
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