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namix: I liked the opening line a lot, though the wording on it was stretched beyond belief. The double up on LeBron James lines seemed like a self-serving move. Obviously that's at the top of your mind right now, but one would have hammered the point home. And neither was all that great. The wording on the decisions line screwed up a good concept. I liked the light weight pun but didn't get the "Greed:" part of the wording there. Just a few instances where tightening things up could have made your clever concepts more effective. The closer was fine. This doesn't compare to your more inspired work, even the more recent stuff I've seen from you.

Greed: The opener was not only the best line of the battle, but also one of the better lines I've read on this site. It was really well-worded and effective. I didn't like much else about this verse, though. The last line had a lot of potential but was sloppily worded. The barely paying the bills line was solid enough. Outside of that opener, your mechanics and wording were pretty much mediocre and your concepts were lackluster. The Mind Assassin line only works if you misunderstand everything about him. Also, the word is "purposefully." But I think the two hits about owning the site plus the very strong opener are just enough to give you this one.

Vote: Greed