Oh gosh, thought this would happen. This is probably the only battle I was looking forward too, thanks for both participants, especially chyeah for hyping it up a bit. Let me start with him.
My favorite line from chyeah was
"I mount horror scopes on the toast that don't jam but it's sign is the Taurus"
Though the horror scopes couldve been used better, it wasn't. It was by far the best line he wrote. A lot of other elements were cool, and he used a traditional style and I thought he fit a lot into his lines that most other writers couldnt have. A few hit and misses. The Grandfather clock was a bit much and seemed stretched. Other than that everything else was better than I thought It'd be.
Neighbor, nice. I read the first four lines and thought you couldn't keep the pace up, but that proved wrong. You delivered line after line, with short fuse of words that was very akin to the neighbor I'm used too.
"The longnose torque put you in the dirt like a lawn gnome garden; knock cornrows off
Let's get the tournament poppin.. switch to auto-target & turbo-shot neurotoxin thru ya corpus callosum "
The wordage in that is just vintage you, and is what many people seek for but can't achieve. Just really wound up wording and it was supremely executed. Chyeah went for a more complex route with the different tangential metaphors, but that didn't really hold up to the sharp scope snippets of neighbor. I think Neighbor showed why he's a real threat with a easy snap of the neck.
v/ Neighbor, and my comment of the night goes to my buddy @
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Neighbor reads anatomy books and subscribes to Guns & Ammo magazine just for swag and flow verses.
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