This was well written - I liked it all the way through - it had a nice flow to it also.
I feel that all of the bars are quotable but for me - these stand out the most:
Exemplary struggles, it’s the perfect way to initiate those in pain
substitutes are short term solutions but it alleviates most the shame
facilitate growth not blame, but u continue to point the finger
there’ll always be cold days but resolution helps u enjoy the winter (ill)
I also like how you place your vocab - it seems you used all of the correct words in their best context.
Much more easily said - you have a fine way with words
Enjoyable read
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