CK...wow that stuff was dope. That was some deep shit...absolutely loved the concept and approach you took with your verse. Mechanically i thought it was top notch as well, not much i can say was wrong with your verse in any way tbh...very very much enjoyed reading it. Kuja...great story, execution wise you executed a great story but i felt some of the language was too simple and some cases you coulda got more complex with the stuff to really help develop the details of the story. With that said i dont think your verse suffered too much cause of that and you did have a solid verse. Tho I gotta say im giving this one to CK for having the better overall verse, everything was a step ahead imo.
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