[Cereal_Killa]

Ob:
Oh man that ish was off the chain.. Like woah.. I have never read from you b4 very impressed.. man I love surrealism as a style of art so third line in im like ok this guy doesn’t just have a well structured verse as far as vocab and rhythm, but he also can drop an interesting character in there.. And as this developed getting deeper and deeper, without being brutally forward on the characters internal struggle you pull all of his piece together.. And you did so by being subtly poetic yet at the same time you completely wrenched the readers heart out.. in a nice way :) Dope verse dude..

Ink:
My maine.. lmao.. dude this was hilarious like” oh you thought I was talking about an innocent young girl, well I fooled you” Man dope, your writing is always hot, always I mean truthfully I love your more outrageous stories but you can drop heat regardless.. A quirky lil piece with a good play on the topic.. Truly enjoyed this..

Vote = Objective

I looked at this like c’mon guys wat is it 20 lines each, that is way too short but somehow you both managed to drop something that really did hold its own.. Saying that against a full length verse the one who didn’t would have been flooded here.. Though as it stands man Ob killed that shit for how short it was his character had showed a history, showed a future and a present that consisted of a diluted history and a future of infinite repetition.. So compared to ink verse in humanizing a grape fruit Ob really did kill this imo.. Hot guys, real nice.. gl to both