adonis - nice. solid flow good imagery nice emotion. overall a polished piece that i cant complain about. the ending verse summed up the problems of the world nicely in a succint manner that didnt elave us bored and feeling preached at.
vinzr - also cool. emotion was good but flow was kind of stretched and the lack of complex schemes and inners hurt you. the topic was somewhat played out but the topics this week were pretty lame so i cant fault you. anyways i think adonis took it on all fronts here
v- adonis
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