objective - cool robert j oppenhemier reference. didnt really like 'huge plus' that much, sort of bluntly spoken rather than rhythmically written. concept was cool, human skulls on pandas was pretty interesting imagery. so its clear your rather creative, might as well put more original, far-out imagery into your verse. always give it a unique touch that seperates you from the other writer. keep up the imagery and work on your rhymes and always try and word things smoothly rather than 'huge plus' didnt like that at all. but keep at it cool verse
ink - haha cool. grapefruit. such a refreshingly, do you mind if i say careless, take on the topic. so many deep verses on death and war week in and week out, yet a deceit leading my mind towards a vagina only to reveal, yes it definitely is a grapefruit. flow was alright, not technically perfect, not gonna nit pick though
v - ink for making me say damn i gotta get my head out the gutter
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