this is rough man....Wish you would at least attempt to ride the beat...
to be honest I only made it through 1:10 then I had to stop it
I get the whole point of wha' you tryna do...But why Hide from the camera if it's a video...Why talk with no rhythm when you have a beat on....Juz not a style I think really exists...at least you puttin' ya self out there an lettin' ya voice be heard...
But please next time ride a beat an actually rap...I can tell you creative enough to come up with somethin' besides this
HoLLa
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