objective; apple a day keeps the doctor away my friend. you spoke about something hopefully nobody in the AOWL goes through; with good reason. rhyming is great for the brain; always puzzle yourself. this was a good piece; had a dry demeanor somewhat; the message was father time; very real. grounded approach. hint of cappuccino cafe.
Ink;great verse. very abstract and not typically worded at all. I had a sense you were just fooling me; you came across somewhat poetic, but it was totally different than your jawn last week. so gotta give credit where credit is due; well done. I always scroll up to the top to read the topic at the end; and you hit this on the money. so did your opponent really
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wow; almost like you two should of just collabed. eerily similar. bittersweet to the maximum. objective left much to worry about. ink was taunting the forbidden fruit; i really hate grapefruit too; with a passion. great job. great battle.
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