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Originally Posted by Kin
ya Finna' Starve, Swimmin' outside the Cage, Feed ya Ribs ta' Sharks
Mister Karp, give the Title a Wave before you Drift Apart...
Like the concept here. I think you could have executed it different, to make more of an impact rather then come off statement'ish.
I'm Carvin´ Karpis's Carcass into Parts he's a Dead Target
Blood from his Garments swept under a rug then I'ma Crip Walk on Red Karpet
This was too statement'ish and seen a lot of these concepts from back in the days.
ya shoulda known that I Rate Him as Overrated, an trust me, I Sugarcoated the Statement
Dopeness is Vacant, Its Clear he Nose, I'm Soberin' a Opiate Patient!!!!
Ehh... Could have used some more work.
Damage his Face, I Plan to slow his Stamina's Pace
to a Stand Still, Watch the Belt Change quicker then on a Mannequin's Waiste...
Nah, this is a played and over used concept & lacked a fresh twist.
Stop ya Streak, Slammin' ya Brakes, ya shoulda Planned an Escape
When Kin Stand in ya Place, it'll Dawn on him to claim "this whole Planet is Apes"!!!!
Again, statement'ish, bro. Could have been executed different to have/land more of an impact.
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Paradigm
Alvin Karpis:
Reverbnation hates you, I bet that ‘in and out’ track got like 5 clicks
That shit exposed you as the catcher no wonder you sound so high pitched
I seewhat you tried here but came off statement'ish but the wording was on point.
Got me battling an aspiring rapper wearing cheap jewelry & feels dumb
I guess the irony is you rock fake silver & couldn’t even fuck the real one
LOL, this was dope.
1punch'll eat em w/ a hook & beat him till he’s shook
I’m a prove Kindle… just watch how I read him like a book
I fucks w/ it..
Stop claiming your hood like you step on the block
Homey your only partner in crime is a gay stripper dressed as a cop
Ehhh, played concepts but wordin an execution was ok.
You wack kid I’m so sick I’ll kill you cuz I’m too violent
Shit the way I got Atkin so quick it might inspire Joe Metts to try it
Ok'ish..
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OVERALL: Decent'ish battle here. Kin seems like he has the basics down but needs to work on more of a harsher execution and get rid of all the decoration (
Bolding,
Italics & Exclamation points!!!!), People here frown on that shit and some maybe ignorant to even vote against it. But overall, work on your execution of your concepts in more of a harsher manner and you'll be straight, bro. I think some of your shit came off a little too wordy which hurt the impact of them or made them come off statement'ish rather then insult'ish. Nothing I can really say about Karps verse other then wish he had some more haymakers in there but none the less a pretty consistent solid drop which IMO, gives him the battle pretty comfortably.
v/Karp