Adonis - obv u have some talent with writing but your inexperience in the text battle arena tells. People don't dig that heteronym style wp. Also chess themed bars are too common, which means unless the bar is amazing, it's meh; there's no middle ground.
Blanco - Beysick/basic is realllllly played! However, the other aspects of the bar were good.
V/ Blanco
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