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Vulgar · 07-12-2014, 07:52 PM

"Man Made Machine" is a grimy track. Excellent lyrics. Nice chorus too. I feel like you would sound better if you rapped a little faster. Just what my ear tells me.

Respect and keep doing your thing.

07-12-2014, 07:52 PM	#2
Vulgar Razor-thin derision Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 4,422 Battle Record: 40-25 Accomplishments - OM HOF Champed - Fight Night LIV - Gimmick Battle League (2x) - Write Week II - Art of Writing League - Storytelling And Topical Invitational Tournament - STI - Haiku Writer Challenge - GWL Picture Challenge(2x) Rep Power: 49604320	"Man Made Machine" is a grimy track. Excellent lyrics. Nice chorus too. I feel like you would sound better if you rapped a little faster. Just what my ear tells me. Respect and keep doing your thing.