awesome battle. props to both.
objective- ya the story line was genius man. it worked on so many levels. the flow was good to me. more multis would have helped your cause but you bolstered your verse with plenty of inners. the imagery was dope. both verses were too short.
ink - i liked your verse alot. very good useage of the fruit describing love and an encounter with a woman. this could have turned out real corny but it didnt and much props for that. only thing was it felt a little LL Cool J ish for me. the lust for a girl has been done to death so it didnt seem as creative as Objectives. dont take it the wrong way i liked it just pointing out the few things i didnt
overall- objectives story gripped me much more. his mechanics werent quite as good but i liked his verse better.
vote- objective
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