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Old 07-12-2014, 01:01 PM   #8
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Allen should have won this. The concept was great, wording was condensed and easy to read, it was humorous, and the delivery top to bottom was flawless. But there was a huge mistake that I couldn't overlook bc it was the primary component keeping the entire bar together, and that was the np. Amen and Amazon are pronounced differently. Aim-en/Aim-azon. That completely ruined it for me. I'm so pissed at you, AK. Rofl.

Amen's bar didn't have the same qualities as AK's, or I should say it wasn't constructed as well as his. The way the setup ended, it made it choppy enough to throw me off. BUT, I dug the concept and thought it was actually on the same level as AK's as far as being dope.

Had AK's np, being very important to the execution of his theme, hadn't been so big of an oversight, I would have easily voted for him.

But it's an oversight I can't ignore.

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