awesome battle
zenland - really good verse. very solid mechanics and story telling. it was literal in nature. didnt use many metaphors or similies and kinda reminded me of my verse last week. get so focused on moving the story along that you forget to add emotion. i mean it was there to a degree but it didnt hit me in the face. the flow was great. very good cadence. overall and awesome verse. good job.
cdm- i thought ur piece was dope. and you went a little more abstract which i enjoyed. it had the cadence that i really enjoy reading. slow and deliberate.
Seen seasons serenely pass, seasoned in wrath,
Seen seasons swiftly clash with reason’s math.
Seen tears hit my span when life don’t go to plan,
Seen blood drench the land when strife brings the <<blam.>>
awesome.
overall- zen had a really well flowing and constructed verse that told an interesting story. kept me locked in. cdm used more of an approach that made you find meaning behind what he was saying. and i liked that. very close but i got
vote- cdm
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