Netcees - View Single Post - Round 2: 7. timeless vs. 2. Vividlyvague \\ timeless wins 3-2

Pinot Grij · 07-11-2014, 10:15 PM

I don't think I'm shocking anyone by voting timeless here.

It would be interesting to see what developed here. Vivid, you were all over the map, but some of the rhymes were pretty cool.

Timeless, this was a big, sweeping story that probably could've been cut down a bit ... felt like it dragged. Went all over the place from comical to kinda dire - maybe could've been a bit more focused? In any event, you take this one.

07-11-2014, 10:15 PM	#4
Pinot Grij Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 863 Battle Record: 23-19 Accomplishments - OM HOF Champed - Fight Night 2 - Write Week V - Netcees Battle League (2x) - Winter Topical II - 1-2 Punch league Rep Power: 29195064	I don't think I'm shocking anyone by voting timeless here. It would be interesting to see what developed here. Vivid, you were all over the map, but some of the rhymes were pretty cool. Timeless, this was a big, sweeping story that probably could've been cut down a bit ... felt like it dragged. Went all over the place from comical to kinda dire - maybe could've been a bit more focused? In any event, you take this one. __________________ Topical C.R.E.A.M.