sick flow, keep expanding your vocab, its coming along good so far, about 2 years ago i was doing the exact same style as you. Work on branching out into storys, lengthining, thickening concepts.
I would mainly focus on expanding in this style: "captain activity could knee cap ten men acting witty sympathy is simply captured and kept intact in captivity infact"
The rhyme scheme was very clever, repeating roots: "cap, act, cap, act, simp, simp, cap, act, cap, act," not to mention the sick multis, but you obviously have mastered them already, at least in a rap dedicated to multis skill. Try keeping that same level of multi skill in a rap with a steady topic, push yourself.
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