Tricky one... Windu had the better concept but Sharp had the sharper delivery... I will have to lean towards the better concept in this instance and vote Windu, but not without some deliberation. The nameplay was fresh and executed well enough on the technical side, but the 'barrage' of 'words' presented like 'this' was unappealing... I think maybe dropping the inverted commas altogether and putting a pic of an everready battery after the bar would have been best. By contrast Sharp's delivery was smooth with a very natural sounding set up bar/rhyme. His concept was pretty decent, albeit somewhat familiar/generic (as the majority of bars are these days), but just not as much of a standout as the other.
V/ Windu
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