I don't understand what Vulgar meant by it's too emo...surely writing is about communicating your thoughts and emotions, and if those emotions are negative at the moment it is only right to reflect that in your writing?
I love Vulgar tho...I thought this was dope, I'm at work right now but I'll try and go more indepth when I'm home, but I agree with Certain that this is my favourite piece from you, which I also said last time I read one of your pieces lol that's a good thing tho, it shows you are growing with every piece and I respect that a lot, keep doing you man, you have the talent and potential to be as dope as anyone.
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Explicit and poisonous violent crime.

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