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dope, your already getting the structure and shit, how to arrange them, you set up a nice pattern with the piano chops, the guitar parts could be left out, but they work,

the main thing im getting from this is the drums, they work but remember less is more alot of the time. you like alot of people starting out, do to much. it works, but it feels like your drumming just to do it, rather than drumming to compliment the groove your creating.

its not bad and not terribly overdone tho

also you can incorporate other drum sounds, i'll make my next little tutorial on that

but yea man i'm impressed, you are catching on quick, just keep doing what you are doing