i enjoyed this quite a bit. definitely more economic from you with a centralized concept. i probably haven't seen you write like this before? it's in a more 'common' vein but still holds your own personality. b-hop doesn't really stop guys anymore; it's his wily craft as a veteran that sees him succeed. the hoplite line was clever. it's also the name of a game i really like by magma fortress.
anyway this was a nice ode (if you could call it that). wordddddddddd.
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