vnzr
your flow is outstanding and the topic just came out perfectly with your word choice..great scene setting foreal
i thought the imagery you had was godam dope. plus you had alot of very cool lines like the elope line and the dials lungs line
where some example of your creative word use while still maintaing that impeccable flow...good shit.
adonis
this some creative shit i gtta say..your verse had so many layers of depth. first off the first stanzas where the lastl ine is the same
i thoought that was just clever and really emphasized the two verse as a strong image..dope shit..the last part of your piece
yo go hard dropping some incredible imagery and vivid descriptions...this was creative and well written.
overall
i got adonis for the simple fact her verse had so many angles to appreciate it from..vin had a dope verse but AD came with some fire
and a reall cool story as well for got to mention that...great battle tbh.
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