I read the whole thing, it was very entertaining 'my friend', you have a natural voice even when doing topicals and it comes through even more natural in this, it was very witty and clever, do you know who Bill Bryson is? If not, he's one of my favourite writers and you remind me a lot of him, turning a casual recounting of a vacation into something not just interesting, but funny and well written...will read more.
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Explicit and poisonous violent crime.

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