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Originally Posted by J.R.

aight ima do this jus for you...and ima honest type nigga..ima always keep it real wit you...so ima drop you sum feed

u're generic as fuck. every1 would say u're a real herb
cuz ur verses ain't direct'or personnel...& mine are scorsese collaborating w/ spielberg

aight now this line was nice, but it wasnt a punch line...you Big Upped yoself..it started off to be a punch then when you started talkin about yourself it went to you uppin yoself

Okay. I know what you mean. Still, I clearly dissed my opponent and then just went from there, saying I was better at what I criticized him for. But oh well.

plus we germans had cruel ways to leave jews and such deceased
but if u kill some1 w/ 'gas, strik'...it stems from that area of ur body, u disgusting freak

once again...gas strik was goin nice then you jus flat out called em a Disgusting Freak...you was boutta make a punch but then you settled jus for a basic insult

If you look closely, you might notice how it is a punchline that had an insult tacked on at the end.

& dude's working in a restaurant. but for this bitch, it's decent
his american dream: from dishwasher to dishwasher not addicted to kitchen cleaners

aight seriously...i got homies that not in tha US and english aint they first laguage either..but this did not Rhyme my nigga...are yall ridin his nuts that hard that yall gone say it did?

I posted the Merriam-Webster pronunciation of the two words.

dirty bitch. u wanted to join a jamaican posse & everyone gave u hell
they said stay away from the shower. ur pics show u followed that advice way too well

ok i guess that was a personal...but look what you did with it..that coulda been a hot line if you woulda formed a punchline out of it..but still just another insult

How is it not a punchline? I really don't get that. It has a clear concept (the shower wordplay). Did you read that he wanted to join the Jamaican Shower Posse? Well, I really don't know how you cannot see a punch in there.

plus getting beat up for the n-word doesn't make u strong or hard
i bet u loved watching the django premiere, but cheered at all the wrongest parts

theres a punchline my nigga...but it wasnt to hard hittin but atleast you didnt jus flat out call em a "retard" or sum shyt...

I think you mean 'too hard-hitting'. Also, I'm kinda lost on your definition of a punchline. Could you please elaborate on that?

see, i'm edgy cuz my old girl won't accept she must now fly solo
...the only kind of denying ex tension YOU know is the way u won ur 1st rd by noshow

[I]um this was not to hard hittin...but you coulda did sumthin really nice with this...ima give you an example[I/]

You might want to put the I after the /. Isn't the BB code automatic, though?

blah blah blah blah blah.......you Been a Clown
you rappin in Circles, cuz a noshow is tha only time you can Win A Round

you see what i did there..i took it and punched..but you have no internal rhymes no transit lines goin into your next bars
look it all comes down to preference...if thats yall style over here then i caint knock...who am i to judge but i am gone keep it real with you tho

Do you realize that the line you just posted is horribly played and would never fly because of that? Honest question.

& strik knows what a real redneck has to do after getting down w/ a hottie
he doesn't care who that Horus. he'll just Falcon punch the kid outta her body

oh i missed this one...i actually liked this line lol

Thank you.

Sass

Don't you think it is somewhat redundant to end all your posts with 'Sass' and then having a signature with a big 'Sass' on top of that? Just wondering.