[Paradigm]

Originally Posted by Megacito

Rest in piecez? You can rest in feces, I'll have the voters saying Amen like Im a deity*
You See me i spit so filthy, I am a goddess so you can not kill me
Feces is pronounced FEE SEES btw. lol u kinda dissed yourself

Im real B and I do this for fun but you do it big? So forget the pun cuz your more like a bun, so niggas stick there meat in you an then cum
lol lame

Your a bum and your probably gay get the f out but dont the lose the faith cuz your an aith/eighth and im the whole ounce if i slapped your fag ass you'll probably bow...wow! then fucking rollbounce**
lame

But not the movie you fucking groupie I do this for the bitches with the big ol booties, you do this for the niggas who are fucking shoobies get it they are fucking shoobies so get your foot out, to lose this battle your a fucking shoe in
lol shoe in is cool but connection is lols

An see me I keeps it moving, see you?, you are fucking losing, cuz this battle is nothing, you couldnt raise ya hand after this bout if you were a raisin muffin
lol

I just took you out the toaster oven, you just lost your bitch, but no joe buddens, sike i meant you just lost to a bitch now your name is nothing, cuz your Amen? So who are you facing? The baddest bitch around I strike like RAIDEN! Lightning on your gayness...
nah not good

I suggest you read around and look at the vets battles in the Archives. Read those and learn to write a metaphor and deliver a setup into a punchline. Here you were just kind of trying to talk shit and it wasn't creative.

Originally Posted by Amen

Lol, wtf...

You're flows a joke & whatever you text is so weak
It'll take a punch to put you in a Coma-To's & easily leave you dead on your feet.
Dead on your feet part is weak connection
Stop testin' me, GEEK, you'll get crushed w/ hands bitch,
It's clear Mags a bigger disappointment, then the one never posted for summer classic.
Solid
I'll son this fat chick & her sex's the reason men split,
Her pussy's so beastly & loose, for a tampon she'd need a tempurpedic mattress!
lol wtf
Facts, shit... & fuckkkkkkkkk force! You'll get smashed...
Europe against a huge cock... but I'm sure this ugly slut can fit foreigner ass.
dead and the setup.
This bitch is funky & your frame's HUGE, so stop hoe,
I could give a monk-e & they'd still rather fuck that gorilla, Amy from Congo.
LOL that movie was so bad it was good, old ass reference
Your wack & weak yo, & you're writtens awful, dear,
Ironic; named yourself Mag A see toes, when your stomach's hidden yours for years.
cool

LOL at some of your bars.

Vote - Amen

Explanation: Megacito doesn't seem to really grasp what battling is all about. Her verse was just kind of rambling talking shit with no punchlines or creativeness. Amen came with a straightforward verse with some lols that setup to the Europe line made me lol in real life.