[Paradigm]

Originally Posted by Silver

your rhymes are so whack & that's a fact
so why you don't you run along have a big mac for snack
I'm guaranteed to succeed, I'll make ya bleed
you look like lighter fluid I be the fire!
so I'm burning you up so call me desire
I be suppressing, killing you with my lyrics & make you depressing
you shaking with you fear
make you shed a thousand tears.
you weak to the heart
go practice your speech before rip through your thoughts.

You have no Punchlines, Personals, Wordplay or Rhyme Schemes. You have weak Metaphors and thats it. I know you must be a troll but please if you happen to not be one, read around battles and imitate and conceptualize bars like the top tier people around netcees do

Originally Posted by RD McFly

Apologies for being tardy, I beg your pardon; I'm retarded..
..or just lazy; you're just crazy..
Lady..you been nuts about scoring with balls far before the world cup started..
sigh.
I'm not going to assume you're fat or that you're likely reading this famished..
but I am so it suits you to know I like the miracle whip heavy on my sammich..
...
you on the ledge maintaining hope still? I prefer a balcony with silicone and beads..
my schemes are silly with no beat...still...that last line sealed the window, sil..
window sil is cool too bad no connection
hit her with both of these 'bows till she drops to her knees and she blows..
cause oral sex until lockjaw would be a better idea then wasting a key on this hoe..
Played, I used a lockjaw/key to victory like 8yrs ago sorry lol
this bitch is a joke, but not funny so if anyone lulz it'll be suprisin'..
picturin' silver's hills is not what I had in mind when my therapist said broad in my horizon.
lol gross

RD only had the creative stuff in this. You should not let the level of your competition completely dictate the level in which you drop, just saying.